And always, I try to find
a better way to say these things:
Mostly, I just want to be clear. But of course,
I want the words to be beautiful, too.
Their flow, their rhythm,
their sounds, the shapes
the lines make on the page-
And so sometimes, I have to remind myself:
Just be honest. Too easy to revise too much,
find I’ve polished away the truth,
and all for the sake of another rhyme.
© Mark Reep 2007
1 comments:
Yes, I agree. Too often I lose the truth in the search for impossible perfection. I love that last line.
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